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I liked this a lot, and I would definitely critique it but I found nothing other than what the others have posted already, and I don't want to sound like ...

Oh, thank you so much for critiquing this! I've been waiting every so patiently for someone to review it on here (even though it's only been like three days). “Thanks,” ...

I understood it until they said "where did you find this guy?" because I thought that they were talking about a girl.

It was quite funny, but it seemed like you switch point of view. It looked like to me that it went from third person to first person. I think it ...

Lol. It's ok. It's my fault, really. I haven't updated. Heck, I haven't even started the next chapter. Shame on me.

I absolutly, positivly love it. This is excellnt. I do not see anything wrong with the idea, the story, or grametical errors. Please Keep writing and working on this one ...

All fixed! Thanks, Heather. Sometimes I type so quickly that I don't see my mistakes, and MS Word doesn't catch all of that before. I really need to look over ...

Personally, I didn't like the series very much. I had a hard time getting into the story. I do think that it's very creative. I liked how they referred to ...

It was a bit confusing. I liked it though. The descriptions were good.

Ooh. Yes, that helps. Thanks.

, and as soon as he finished saying that, I knew he was lying. Again, some more unneeded words. Why else would you bother mentioning he was a bad liar ...

Very funny. I didn't see any grammatical errors, and even if I did, I forgot them. And I liked your commercial on youtube. The voices were funny.

Ah! Wonderful. You had me hooked on the first sentence. I didn't find any mistakes, by the way. Oh! I loved how the main character called the girls dunce #1 ...

I didn't really know how to describe how she laughed. It was one of those "hmmph" kind of laughs, but I don't like to use that in stories. Does that ...

Very interesting. You kept me hooked on it beginning to end. If I critiqued this, I'd be echoing the other two who posted before me, so I've got really nothing ...